Wednesday, January 2, 2008

INDEPENDENCE


(Dedicated to my great Teacher ,Navneeta madam, who ignited the fire of poetry in me, to my most beloved & respected Parents,all my gr8 buddies....to the immortal Martyrs of SWATANTRA SANGRAM and to my ever-inspiring Motherland,
INDIA)


The World becomes excited,

When it hears this word.

A country gets them saluted.

Thats none other then the GREATEST INDIA!!!


The greatest INDEPENDENCE of this world,

Where its citizens fought for this world.

The world remembers them forever.

The possibility of forgetting it, never!!



Gandhi fought for the Africans,

To get rights to the Negroes.

And almost all Indians fought for the Burmese.

This country has produced the greatest Heroes!!


Never happened before,

Not again to happen!!

A Freedom struggle like this;

Unbelievable and beyond imagination!!


Gandhi,Nehru,Bose,Patel, Desai

Gokhale,Tilak,Bhagat,Ambedkar.

Wow!!What great men they were!!

And now, even a single man like them can be found nowhere!


They all fought for the Freedom;

Gave us, the greatest INDEPENDENCE,

And became GOD of Gods!!

And now, not a single person to remember them, it is very odd!


Now, the independent Government,

What a role it has played!

To make INDIA enter the list of most corrupt countries!

Really the great INDIAN Martyrs should be very disgusted with them!


And now in the Celebration of this great nation's 50th year of Golden jubilee INDEPENDENCE,

What gifts can We give to Our nation of unmatched hospitality and integrity????

Casteism, corruption, terrorism, poverty, violence?

Certainly not, one who helps these evil things to burden the country is not at all an Indian!


An Indian should promote peace, co-operation, prosperity,literacy,

And play an important role in its development and economic growth.

He should be a light of great luminosity who can educate all the unlearned.

All that and much more, makes a true INDIAN of TRUE INDIA.







5 comments:

Ritesh. P said...

My closest of the pals has actually not done enough justice to his talent. If someone can come up with such a beautiful poem in his very maiden attempt, it's just impossible to value his potential.

This is just one of his poems, in fact, a part of it, but there are innumerable many poems he's indited. A true poet by heart. Bard in the making

I liked the lines Negroes and Heroes. He's captured the efforts of Mahatma in such a telling fashion. Great work.

Come on Sant, do come up with many more inspirational poems.

۩ Pinaka ۩ said...

my bro and my best buddy always a patriotic man, this poem is realy great..keep going buddy...

Vinay said...

The very well know scientist of our class.I just came to know that he writes poems too.
This poem at such a young age is really great.
Great work my friend.

ANKITHA said...

Its really nice to see "santhosh" like person in now a day generation..very great, he has done a good job writing abt independence..

Unknown said...

Its his internal feeling which had expresed all this. I know that he feels lot more than he expressed. God has blessed him with such a great talent of putting his feelings on a sheet a paper and express in a wonderful manne. I really say Hats Off for his talent.
Santosh u r the best.